Comic 3 - Holocrash - Chapter 01 - Page 0003
27th Nov 2019, 8:34 PM in Holocrash
Holocrash - Chapter 01 - Page 0003
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Besides being grammatically necessary, without the comma in "Yes I am, Niko" it is initially unclear that she isn't saying she's Niko, especially since Niko's question looks like it's supposed to be the second text balloon, so most people will probably read her line second.

Also, this is EXCELLENT art for a 2009 3D comic.
smee440 edit delete reply
smee440
>Guest.
Thanks for the comment. Grammar and bubble position fixed.
smee440